audience and offer

The funnel isn’t broken. Your offer is.

If your funnel’s getting traffic but not converting, the instinct is to tear it all down.

New copy.
New ads.
New platform.
New agency.

But here’s the truth:
Your funnel isn’t broken. Your offer is.

We’ve seen this over and over again, founders obsessing over pages, tech, and tools, when the issue is that the thing they’re selling isn’t packaged to convert.

So let’s break it down.

What makes an offer convert?

Strong offers aren’t just “good ideas.”
They’re positioned, priced, and packaged with your buyer’s brain in mind.
They speak to pain. They agitate desire. They offer a transformation, not just a transaction.

Alex Hormozi talks about it all the time, an irresistible offer isn’t about fancy bonuses or urgency timers. It’s about making the value feel undeniable and the decision feel obvious. If you can’t explain what you do, who it’s for, and why it matters, in a sentence, your audience won’t hang around to figure it out.

In his words, the best offers “solve painful problems with speed and certainty.”
That’s what sticks.

Russell Brunson, founder of ClickFunnels, puts it simply: every page of your funnel needs a hook, a story, and an offer. If the offer is weak, no amount of redesign will save it.

Because the truth is, the funnel is just the delivery system.
The offer is the engine.

The Offer Audit

Here are 5 things to check before you touch your funnel:

1. Clear value gap
Can you answer, in one sentence, who your offer is for, what problem it solves, and what outcome it delivers?
If it’s vague, fluffy, or trying to serve everyone, you’ve already lost them.

2. Proof
People don’t just buy outcomes. They buy evidence.
Screenshots, testimonials, case studies, even internal logic, it matters.

3. Offer structure
Overwhelm kills sales.
Frame your offer around outcome + method + timeline, not a laundry list of features.

4. Urgency and relevance
Why now? Why this? Why you?
Create urgency without manipulation. Help them see why they can’t afford to delay.

5. Frictionless path to yes
If it takes 7 clicks to buy, you’re leaking sales.
Nail your CTA. Simplify the checkout. Make it stupidly easy to say yes.

Still not converting? It might not feel human.

Yes, we should be using automation.
Yes, we should be leveraging AI.
But if your funnel doesn’t feel human, it fails.

Bart Kowalczyk, who’s helped scale growth funnels for SaaS and B2B startups, said it best:
Behind every funnel is a human.

Your offer should sound like you get them. Like you’ve been where they are.
It should connect.
It should understand objections.
It should lead with clarity, and urgency.

Ben Foster, a strategist who works across brand and tech, summed it up like this:
“The funnel isn’t outdated. It’s how most people use it that’s broken.”

And we agree.

Too many people spend weeks building a funnel, then panic when it doesn’t convert.
So they tweak the emails. Move the CTA 14 pixels.
But the problem was never the funnel.
It was the message.

What to do next:

  • Reposition your offer using actual buyer psychology

  • Audit every step of your sales flow for friction

  • Simplify the message and spotlight the result

Then, and only then, build the funnel around it.

Because a great funnel can’t save a weak offer.
But a great offer?
It can sell itself.

BEHIND THE BLOG

Hi, I'm Steph

I'm the one you'll find writing all of these blogs. I try to make sure they're packed with A LOT of value, my own experience, the businesses experience and also include actual research, data from clients and more. 

I love writing and bringing peoples big visions to life, so enjoy my ramblings and I hope you take something away.